pasta is my favorite food

it's so simple yet so good

with each bite i stop to say

this yee fun is ho ho mei
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  • Ball
  • This peom makes me laugh!! XD
  • KAR!s
  • yummy pasta =P
  • Bessie
  • <p>Khalil, 平時你寫埋寫埋的poem, 有無抄底佢, 一個星期一首, <br/>一年都有四五十首詩....可以出本《詩歌集06' 》喎..., 或者係,<br/>每週一詩, 作為兒童詩歌朗誦咁......都幾唔錯吖!...haha..<img src="http://hk.yimg.com/i/icon/16/8.gif"></p>
  • 折翼天使
  • <p>hihi, I am a new comer to this blog</p><p>the poem you wrote is really funny ahaha keep going!!</p>
  • 小桑
  • <p>你寫詩寫得咁好<br/>不如下次出碟時隨碟奉送"大同詩集"啦</p>
  • Kimi—or–Lils {^.~&amp;quot;}
  • <p>Pasta, <br/>I'm hungry and I want to eat some pasta,<br/>but no, mom's preparing some beef and "fan",<br/>so I must eat it before I feel bad... ????? o.O</p><p>Nice little poem u wrote, I like pasta too.</p><p>Good Day!</p>
  • Terry@V
  • Khalil~ Bring me to that pasta place next time~ Call me~^_^<br/>
  • yoko903
  • k先生! 我都係食齌架! 食平時多數去邊度食飯架?
  • QQ
  • <strong>i like "yee fun" very much too!<br/><br/>  this poem is very funny ar ^^</strong>
  • 呀 翹
  • <p>Khalil先生...<br/>大家都知道你創作力滿瀉啦...<br/>之前有 " HO VERY LANG " ...<br/>今次仲勁... 真係唔俾個 "叻" 你都唔得呀!!!哈哈~</p><p>睇左信未呀?? (我都覺得自己煩...成日問...)<br/>入面D野真係好重要!!!未睇好快D睇啦下!!!</p>
  • ENCY*XD
  • <p>我都好鍾意食意粉XDD<br/>不過好耐冇食=P<br>好鍾意呢句<br>this yee fun is ho ho mei笑死我XDD</p>
  • Ashlee
  • Wow...u r bloody creative!!! U will be a poet in one day, haha...<img src="http://hk.yimg.com/i/icon/16/18.gif"><br/>haha, anyway pasta is my favorite food too!  yumm....<br/>I love to put extra source and herbs + feta cheese into it..ha<br/><br/>
  • charmaine~*
  • <p>笑死左...XDD 好鍾意最尾一句 !!</p><p>你自己煮架 ? 定係出街食架 ?</p><p>睇到我好肚餓...而家好想食添...</p>
  • carmen25
  • <p>嘩,Khalil,你好好文彩呀!!</p><p>其實我都好鍾意食意粉o架!!</p>