if only we could see further

if only we needed not to guess

if only we would know what's next

our hearts and spirits might be secure

our doubts and fears might be assured

but if to know such things we could

then hope would not be understood

nor would we face a trial or test

or carry on to show our best

the when or why or where or if

just one of many beauties' gifts

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  • 毛毛
  • what a wonderful poem!!!!
    the sky is so beautiful!!!

    take care yrself!!!!
    looking forward to yr new ablum!!!!(3)
  • b女*
  • <p>IS THIS POEM REPRESENT YOUR FEELING NOW?</p><p>IT SEEMS THAT U HAVE STH TO WORRY!</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>JUST DO IT IF U WANNA TO DO</p><p>IF ONLY U DON&#39;T FEEL REGRET</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>TAKE CARE MY FRD<img src="http://hk.yimg.com/i/icon/16/3.gif"/></p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>b女*</p>
  • 悠然/angeldevil
  • <p>I second what charmaine said it gives me this "度身訂造" feeling as well!!!!</p><p>nicely written!!!!!</p>
  • CHARMAINE
  • <p>這首詩令我聯想到很多事</p><p>很像度身訂造的</p><p>很有意義</p><p>也令人很有感觸</p><p>是甚麼令你突然有此主題之聯想 ?</p><p>這照片...從你家往外拍的嗎 ?</p><p>零晨二時...怎麼不去睡 ?</p><p>要好好保養身子才有精神去做好你所需要做的事</p>
  • ruby
  • <p>NICE POEM!*3*<br />A MEANINGFUL AND INSIGHTFUL!<br />WE ARE WAITING FOR YOUR NEW ALBUM!<br />WORK HARD AND TAKE CARE!<br />OH!I HAVEN&#39;T SEEN YOU FOR QUITE A LONG TIME.<br />MISS YOU SO MUCH!*3*<br /></p>
  • Eliss
  • omg!!<br />Sorry....is that&#39;s great!<br />
  • Eliss
  • Many Poem in your blog...<br />than&#39;s great!!
  • QQ
  • <p><font style="BACKGROUND-COLOR:#ffffff;" color=#ff0000>KHALIL:</font></p><p><font style="BACKGROUND-COLOR:#ffffff;" color=#ff0000>A great pic and a really&nbsp;good poem! =]<br />Work hard !&nbsp; =] <br />We are waiting for your great album. <br />Take care...<img src="http://hk.yimg.com/i/icon/16/1.gif"/><br /><br />-QQ*</font><br /></p>
  • reg~
  • <p>hi poet fong!!</p><p>it&#39;s always fun to read your poems... funny and creative!</p><p>=D</p>
  • Carmen~**
  • <p>ha ha...if only</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>&nbsp;Good poem!!</p>